Blog Reflection Week 11

This week we recieved feedback from our peers and what they think about our video. This feedback helped because people were for our work and really were intreged to know about how we filmed certain shots and how we added and changed effects to make it look the way it did. We also were told that maybe we could add something in between the video give more of a storyline rather than the artist just being in the forest. We have the idea of showing more of our artist being rejected because that is what the video is about. The artist is suffering in the inside of the industry but when he is out in the open he is free to be the artist he wants to be without anyone telling who he is and who he should be. We are planning to film the rest of these shots over the weekend so that we can add them all on the following week and come to a climax of our video. These extra shots will make the storyline clearer for the audience to understand and should give it that extra lift to make it more exciting to watch.